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Need help diagnosing motion and improving form

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Hello, I believe what I have is an Al Di Meola wrist motion. But when I am doing PG 6 stuff I am trying to upward pick slant to get a DSX. and for the YM patterns I am going downward pick slant to get USX. I also added tremolo videos showing me trying the two different pick slants. I am going as fast as I can here, so it is very sloppy with missed notes, and too many pick strokes too I believe. Also I see that my escapes are maybe not getting away from the strings enough, as I am hitting strings accidentally when moving strings. My questions are: Should I focus my energies on doing either DSX or USX? Should I adjust hand position for these or try another method? What other suggestions do you have to make these cleaner? I also feel like when I am going fast for these patterns, It gets so sloppy towards the end and I have a hard time finishing and locking in on the high E strings. What is best method to improve that? Thank you in advance for all your help. -D