Stuck with inconsistency and tension

Hi, I've always been a bad stringhopper with a limit in the 120-130 range. I did the motion tests and they all came out in the 200+ range, but I'm having a hard time developing a reliable, consistent picking technique without a lot of tension. Video attached--any suggestions would be much appreciated! The buzzing on the high E string is my iPhone touching the string from the Magnet.