TC 2-65 Note First Recorded Attempt

Hey tommo/anyone viewing! Last TC, Tommo guided me to practice the 65-note challenge to check and see if my right-hand chunking was working prior to moving to string changes. Here is my current progress report on that task. I have two versions, one where I intentionally attempted to expose more of the pick. How is it coming along? Should i get more repetitions before moving on to the next sections, or proceed forward to the next ones? Any constructive recommendations are welcome Thanks, Theo